What the bullet rewriter fixes on each line
The rewriter pulls your 5 to 8 weakest bullets and rebuilds each one verb-first and impact-led, so the line leads with what you did instead of what you were responsible for. It scores every bullet before and after the fix, names the exact metric the bullet is missing, and gives you a question to help surface that number from your real work. It also surfaces the recurring patterns weakening the whole resume so you can apply the same fix to lines it did not touch.
Verb-first openers
- Replaces passive phrasing like managed or responsible for with a concrete action verb.
Impact over duty
- Reframes each bullet around the outcome, not the task you were assigned.
Before and after score
- A strength rating on each line so you can see how much the rewrite moves it.
Metrics to dig up
- Marks where a number belongs and asks the question that helps you find the real one.
Recurring patterns
- Calls out the weak habits repeating across bullets so you can fix the rest yourself.
Optional role skew
- Tilts the language toward a target role when you supply one, without inventing experience.
